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43ad33  No.386299

It doesn't matter what others think of your reading choices, as long as you love to read.

This board has amazing writefags, and OC is the lifeblood of the board, however, some people long to see stories about their waifus that writefags don't normally do.

In the same spirit as a Drawthread, this is for Violated Heroes to request stories they'd like to see written, or for new and old writefags to link their work for critique, or for others to enjoy.Shilling is encouraged!

If you have large amounts of text, or are running an update to stories, please consider posting it all to a pastebin and posting here when it is updated or finished.

Please keep things on topic. It's fine to talk about stories, characters, plots, etc, but keep the blog-posting out of here.

Thread 1: https://archive.is/eT2UX

Thread 2: https://archive.is/zZyJk

Thread 3: https://archive.is/yUCIq

Thread 4: https://archive.is/5e1Qr

Thread 5: https://archive.is/vWMc9

Thread 6: https://archive.is/O2ckz

Thread 7: https://archive.is/B7Hfg

Thread 8: https://archive.is/dxA9v

Thread 9: http://archive.is/SgT2c

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44ca87  No.386361

File: 7014192234f37a4⋯.png (1.8 MB, 690x1017, 230:339, dragoncorehexer.png)

First Tanuki free post. This dragon girl from Yugioh seems pretty interesting. She has fought so many (literal) dragons that she turned into a dragon girl. I wonder what kind of story you could make out of her? I'm not much of a write fag myself besides a few poems I wrote years ago. I'm merely throwing this into the pot for inspiration.

a15af6  No.386377


Female paladin that is getting a slowburn monsterization? Like, she defeats the dragons and that unleashes like a little explosion of energy that gets past her armor's enchantments against it. Eventually she just ends up raping her squire and starting a lair of her own.

Just spitballing here, might actually write a story about that, because I like slowburn transformations.

40c1a0  No.386380


Bumping this idea

2f9d2c  No.386393

File: 7845b1e40eff12c⋯.png (157.58 KB, 1200x3254, 600:1627, pmc5.png)

File: 99f91abd8e59681⋯.png (132.44 KB, 1095x2059, 1095:2059, pmc4.png)

File: 196f162122c9033⋯.png (149.34 KB, 1553x1843, 1553:1843, pmc3.png)

File: a1e9a4c600d3746⋯.png (389.52 KB, 1639x4848, 1639:4848, pmc2.png)

File: d1f21f595618be0⋯.png (113.36 KB, 1616x1593, 1616:1593, pmc1.png)

It's something I thought of for a while now, but would a modern day setting with monster girls have squads like the anon from pics related doing the exact same shit but with runaway sons instead?

49b95b  No.386405

I need some mad comfy good feels

e972bf  No.386410


Even if those are indeed real, I pray something like that never happens in a world of monstergirls. It shouldnt happen

d24c1a  No.386421


This would be less private contractor work, and more RWDS stuff. Not happy ending things.

c6dd09  No.386449


Glad this shit isnt real, he wrote pretty convincingly though

2f9d2c  No.386481



I thought it might have some decent hijinks potential. My bad, fellas.

40c1a0  No.386488


Jesus Christ that is vile

However, a sterilized version of this with mg squads retrieving their clients’ sons or prospective husbands from either their own domiciles or (in the case of rebellious sons) secret handholding clubs has some potential.

a6f251  No.386509


The idea of a highly secretive club where tired husbands/boyfriends just hold hands or play patty-cake is hilarious to me.

b917f6  No.386625

File: a1e568f9b29848e⋯.png (63.26 KB, 310x229, 310:229, that_was_fucking_gay_shit.png)


>handholding and playing patty cake with other dudes

603ab2  No.386702


Bump with cross-posting from the Greentext Thread:

Superheroine bunnygirl falls in love with a not-so-villanous villian (Saturday Morning Cartoon style).

. https://pastebin.com/a8ukwH4a

I hope you like it, even though I could've done better in terms of Saturday Morning Cartoon atmosphere.

Oh yeah, I'd like to write an ending too, but which one do you like best?

Villain end: The Count Vice introduce his new Evil Partner in crime: Lethal Lazuli.

Hero end: Lago Lazuli teams up with the unexpected Count Valor.

Neutral end: MG North's newest super couple is a little odd. But they're madly in love, that's for sure.

2be2eb  No.386737

I have an idea for a lion girl story with parts being them meeting in highschool and married life after. What's the best way to get to all points. Should I do a flashback to how they met or just do a time skip at a few points?

91c5c6  No.386746


Personally, I just think it's funny that there are entire secret societies dedicated to handholding because their waifus won't do it.

e20ef7  No.386749


As you didn't give much information, I'll just say in just a general sense you should keep a story chronological unless you have very good reason not to. Else you risk either confusing readers or pissing them off.

55c896  No.386751

Any word on these two stories prompts from the previous thread?

>Dragon waifu's father was killed by a dude and she goes to kill said dude only to find he's survived by a son and has to decide how to deal with that situation.


>David Lynch style murder mystery with quirky townfolk and weird happenings in some small mountain town featuring some monstergirls.

40c1a0  No.386766


I was thinking something more along the lines of “Rebellious son runs away from arranged marriage with Demon to go desperately assert his freedom by holding a bunch of girls’ hands in Europe like a MANWHORE.”

Instead of being brainwashed into compliance upon return, he just gets raped into submission by his now-slightly-more-yandere-and-justifiably-so bride to be.

a6f251  No.386776

File: bc3140eeedbdbab⋯.jpg (62.33 KB, 953x730, 953:730, Dang it.jpg)


Shit, i forgot to add "with human women". I only now realize that it makes it sound gay as fuck.

Fuck me, that's awful.

2f9d2c  No.386792


I was kinda thinking something along the lines of "Rebellious son runs away from home in order to join a chaste temple in bumfuck nowhere" or boys getting radicalized by nearby palladin sects or something. Or actual kidnapping by isolated San Francisco-esque mini towns where the victims get stockholmed and force-fed soylent.

1f17a3  No.387110

Just remembering the Transylvanna, and Most Wanted stories in hopes the writefags remember and continue the stories, or somebody else maybe takes inspiration.



They seemed like good holiday times…

ff9edf  No.387287

I wrote a story based around a homebrew version of MGE mixed with some of my own shit.

https://pastebin.com/3QRviKYr pls enjoy

bed654  No.387339


>local man BTFOs orgasm denial fetishists out of sheer rage


a32e97  No.387356


Someone watched Troy before writing this

896ce9  No.387366

Here's a short valentines day writefag involving a qt3.14 Jinko


Haven't finished any writefags a lot lately

b8db6d  No.387382


This is good shit, minisatan. I like how the jinko decided to take the gentler approach. And thanks to the mc for asking the real questions.

2f9d2c  No.387674

File: 624c980d78c320a⋯.jpg (129.83 KB, 1000x1000, 1:1, panda pussy.jpg)

Are there any stories or greentexts involing Ren Xiongmao's? I got a mad case of panda fever that won't stop.

6ce243  No.387711


not mg related but do you have more of those contractor stories? theyre entertaining as all fuck

40c1a0  No.387761


I remember one from the hellhole that was the old MGEwiki’s fanfic section. Plot was basically:

>local village is negotiating with nearby demon realm for trade

>one of the villagers at negotiations is an awkward farmer’s son

>Ren Xiongmao is one of the mg negotiators

>she starts flustering the farmboy, who can’t handle it and has to leave

>hijinx ensue and the village gets invaded by order and demon realm forces simultaneously

>Farmboy is lost in the confusion, found by the same Ren Xiongmao, and proactive dated

It’s probably lost in the ether somewhere, but it was one of the better stories in a sea of cringe.

2f9d2c  No.387766


Only ones I know exist. Sorry, pal.


>Getting pre-consent sexed in the middle of a battlezone

Ambassadors are truly next level

91d9fd  No.387768

File: 1941cd702aa4b59⋯.jpg (4.09 MB, 3035x4299, 3035:4299, MKR_3000_wow.jpg)


>pre-consent sex

Is that what the feminists are calling it now.

c46d24  No.387769

Do any of you have advice as how to be a writefag?

7312ae  No.387771


Write. No seriously, just write. It may be utter trash, but you’ll get better and better at it with time. Write something, anything at least once a day

85e8b4  No.387772


>Is that what the feminists are calling it now.

Only when it's muds.



>proof-read at least once after you're done with it

>read stuff you like and try to analyze what makes you like it

85e8b4  No.387773


Also, sauce. IQDB didn't work.

b8db6d  No.387774


I only do this beause you understood I was joking. Remove spaces. Standard warnings apply.

http s://ww w.pixiv .net/member_illust.php?mode=m edium&illust_id=73302979

85e8b4  No.387786



Also, removing the https://www. is enough to remove the hyperlink, you can just post it like pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=73302979

4824dd  No.387791



I made a first bit of writing on this idea, mostly introducing the squire and the knight. I'm currently keeping the fights between the paladin and the dragons vague, as they don't really matter.

What do you guys think, anything I should change?

9b603d  No.387792


Nice! Though how do male harems work here, other than being in suspended animation for the daughters.

9c389b  No.387793


>Though how do male harems work here

They don't.

f7ef2e  No.387794

Hey, do any of you guys buy those monster girl books on Amazon? Any of them worth it?

2f9d2c  No.387795


I got them. They're worth getting into in my opinion.

4824dd  No.387796



They really don't. Dragons are kind of defaulting to worst girls in this, so you don't feel bad about them dying in large amounts. I'm planning on making Elloy, as an ex-paladin, more monogamic.

f7ef2e  No.387797


read stories you enjoy to get a sense of "style" I like Brandon Sanderson books,(though he lately got bullied into accepting homos. I prefer his old school Mormon "nope" stance, but as far as I can tell he only has one homo in all of his books and he's a nobody character with no stake in anything and no POV)

I wrote a lot before I showed anyone my stories, because most of them are bad. You'll suck at first, but you need to get past that to get good. Also don't try for an epic fantasy as your first story. I mean you can, but you won't finish it, and it will discourage you. Write short stories first, 20 pages max. Just getting done with it will make you happy and you'll be more likely to start another one. Its easier to write six 10,000 word stories over one 60,000 word story

f7ef2e  No.387798


which ones specifically? If any of you have one on there, shill it to me, and I might buy it

2f9d2c  No.387799


Both encyclopedias. You'd get some updated art on Gargoyle and Red Oni and I like the translations a bit better than the web ones. There's also some lore if you're into that but if that's not enough you might wanna skip.

f7ef2e  No.387800


oh, I have those. I meant the books written by fans. The novels.

484f2b  No.387802



on top of revising, don't immediately go back and revise something, let the story sit for a few days before you go back over it

that way your mind wont gloss over everything you just wrote since it's still fresh in your memory, you'll catch spelling/grammar mistakes easier doing that

f7ef2e  No.387804


Its a good idea, its just… those were so horrific. So horrific in fact it makes professional kidnappers look like heroes

484f2b  No.387808

I swear I'm not dead you guys.


Also, I would have written and posted this a week ago, but some dumb shit happened at work which made me lose the motivation to write it for a few days, and by the time I got my motivation back, it was a few days before Valentine's Day and I didn't want to rush things.

8320f3  No.387831


Now this was fucking QUALITY, m8. Keep it up.

6ce243  No.387847


bumping for first one

8b4c67  No.387880


Out of all the yugioh cards you could have waifu'd, you chose a shitty level 8 vanilla tuner. For shame dude, for shame.

16c5d9  No.387936



c46d24  No.387948

File: d96d69926afc426⋯.jpg (173.91 KB, 640x640, 1:1, explore-alberta-1.jpg)

Well, I tried my hand at some writefaggotry, I don't know what I was doing honeslty.

Here it is


I probably shouldn't have made my first story end in a cliff hanger but oh well

44ca87  No.387952

File: eab362be1596609⋯.jpg (692.17 KB, 701x1038, 701:1038, 7elemental_hero_stratos_by….jpg)

File: a83ac5191d91aae⋯.jpg (902.15 KB, 813x1185, 271:395, ghostrick_angel_of_mischie….jpg)

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File: a28f91492c10f7f⋯.jpg (3.83 MB, 3624x2500, 906:625, 2498246 - Andrew_(artist) ….jpg)

File: 2b31cbdea5a02e8⋯.png (1.7 MB, 692x1012, 173:253, summonsorceress.png)


It's because she has a relevant back story. she's a trade in target at least. I am aware of many yugioh waifus of which the majority fall under the dark mage category. Here are a few examples of ones that don't with the exception of summon sorceress perhaps someone could write a story about one of those?


What kind of dumb shit happened at work? Is there something you would like to talk about? /monster/ has your back anon. Enough good writefags have already killed themselves because they realized their waifus in their stories wouldn't real.

55c896  No.388012


I came up with another story prompt that I'm sure /monster/ will hate. Basically, sometime in the mid to late 1800's there is a fellow who is a Van Helsing like character with the personality of One Punch Man's Sataima. He's been tasked by the church to rid the world of abominations and that's pretty much all he does 24/7. Essentially he's the reason why monstergirls don't exist in any capacity in our current universe. I had a whole montage in my mind of him traveling across the world and dispatching monstergirls of all kinds in a variety of gruesome ways with an aurora of callous indifference.

To cater to the /monster/ audience this would have to be a prelude of sorts since I don't think anyone would care that much for a story about a guy who only goes around killing monstergirls rather than loving them. To make it work, it would have to lead into some kind of ancestry gag wherein some distant offspring of monsters long since slain attempt to take revenge on the decendant that killed thier ancestors and it'd devovle into some comedy/harem antics of some sort I think.

Unlike the "you killed my father!" dragon lady prompt which would be more dramatic this would be more of an excuse for a gags and such. My humor is rather dark so I figure the prelude may be too uncomfortable for some to indulge in but I like the concept of dealing with uncomfortable situations laid at your feat by ancestors you never knew..

c46d24  No.388027


I updated this little project of mine


If any of you could give some feed back I would very much appreciate it.

c40cd8  No.388074


>Adolph Himmler


I'm interested though, please continue.

c40cd8  No.388075


Regarding the setting, the guy has a car and driver's license but he's using a spear, and has no such thing as a gun, or a phone? Did he lose them?

Also, might wanna check the punctuation and pacing on some of the lines.

c46d24  No.388095


welp, I wrote another update It takes a while to write doesn't it?



Thanks. I haven't edited the older parts yet but I've tried to have better grammar in this new one, by which I mean I looked up grammar and used the first thing I saw as a guide.


I was looking for names that meant wolf and I saw 'adolf" and 'adolph'

7312ae  No.388101


I think he assumed you put Hitler’s and Heinrich Himmler’s names together

5a2753  No.388121


>Negro Vikings

Well that got really weird really quickly

a32e97  No.388138


>Adolph Himmler

We must secure the existence of our waifus and a future for awoo children

ce5c60  No.388193

File: 7e82c9738cfae73⋯.jpg (445.79 KB, 700x1004, 175:251, __dhampir_and_vampire_mons….jpg)


What would be Hitlers favourite monster?

9b603d  No.388199



2f9d2c  No.388205



44ca87  No.388269


Dragons, most likely. They give off an extreme amount of pride and are not afraid to be nationalistic. Also, most of them are white. I can see Hitler respecting other monsters as well. An example of another one is the titania. Also I can see him respecting most of the monsters from Zipangu, like the Ochimusha and Ryu as in real life, he respected the japanese.

40c1a0  No.388294

File: a163285caf1b4b4⋯.jpeg (33.65 KB, 600x600, 1:1, 4DF75B44-19B3-4AF7-916B-7….jpeg)


Well I’m inclined to say Jinkos based on his love of tigers

8f4aeb  No.388299


A Heil-Hound.

Or, on a more serious note, a Leanan Sidhe.

75e3a1  No.388303


I think Eva Braum would be an Angel for him. Though I now wonder what the other guys would have gotten

484f2b  No.388304


eagle harpies

c46d24  No.388313

Another update. I think this is the larged update yet.


8fd92e  No.388314


I am 100% confident that unless you write some corny bullshit to get out of that cliffhanger, you have written yourself into a corner.

That, or muhfuggen wizard is actually the MC.

c46d24  No.388318


>you have written yourself into a corner.


8b43ee  No.388328

File: 3ad8a9ca716ba52⋯.jpg (809.98 KB, 848x1200, 53:75, harpie.jpg)


I still like Harpies, I think they're probably one of the things that got me in to monstergirls.

44ca87  No.388383


Do you play harpies in yugioh? Have you considered any other monster girl archtypes?

9b603d  No.388390


*Adolf is hitting it from behind*


db76d9  No.388397


Based on an idea I've had for a little while but couldn't find the motivation to put together until now

3d5524  No.388398


king tiger girl when?

44ca87  No.388399

File: 1da82a2a3089836⋯.jpg (535.76 KB, 850x991, 850:991, sample_86304ec4be909b5e376….jpg)

File: ed59f2cc8c437b5⋯.jpg (45.18 KB, 474x670, 237:335, th.jpg)



graf zeppelin comes to mind, even if she is a boat girl.

c46d24  No.388404

File: e80a04e60cfc709⋯.jpg (159.19 KB, 875x913, 875:913, ice_mage_by_adlovett-d4zjf….jpg)


Well, I wrote some corny bullshit, enjoy


8b15ab  No.388411


>*Adolf is hitting it from behind*

>what’s a greentext

6272da  No.388414


Yeah! What the hell is green text??? They have nothing like this on Tumblr or Reddit. it's crazy!

66e452  No.388417


Ironic shitposting is still shitposting.

40c1a0  No.388418


Well that was not the direction I expected this to go

c46d24  No.388504


He's not dead yet

8f4aeb  No.388538

Had an idea about big story about a anti-monster society getting screwed up when one of the daughters of their elites turns out to be a lilim daughter of the demon queen with her magic sealed. The event that reveals this and breaks the seal results in several conversions and at least one alping.

2a0ec8  No.388583

Lots of jealous Monster s writing stories here. I always see something like "boobs that would make a succubus jealous" or so and so thing would put a succubus to shame

eeaf91  No.388584


Especially since it's the cowgirls who have the mega-milkers

c46d24  No.388602

File: bcf4652400a0e24⋯.jpg (52.61 KB, 480x480, 1:1, Wolves.jpg)


I don't know what I was thinking with this update.https://pastebin.com/9gu74rfL

ee2f17  No.388710


Thoughts on my story? Leave feedback as needed.

ee887c  No.388751


Pretty good. I hope you update soon.

ce5c60  No.388777

File: da9a2ef48629820⋯.png (3.57 MB, 1875x2500, 3:4, __original_drawn_by_sogaya….png)

Guys i am looking for a story named Pretty boy

Its about a male companion and a kitsune. Can somebody give me a link?

bd9b23  No.388781

ce5c60  No.388792

File: f5e29c91c4df556⋯.jpg (256.38 KB, 921x1280, 921:1280, f5e29c91c4df556a0c309e592c….jpg)


Oh my god, thank you

Windows deleted all of my shit now i have to download all the shit that was lost.

Ammit bless (You)

1acd3b  No.388821


Interesting story, I'll be waiting for updates as well

9935a5  No.388827


Some dialogue and words (like "traitor) repeat a bit too often, sometimes even in the same paragraph. The switch from first person to third person is also a tad weird but not bad.

90a92b  No.388904

File: db8ebc419c33e9a⋯.gif (2.51 MB, 286x180, 143:90, Really disbelief doubt.gif)


Did not care for tbh. Too much gay shit.

1acd3b  No.388905



9e0f35  No.388920



Kinda the point. It's supposed to be shit shock humor.

1acd3b  No.388925


In the previous thread someone asked for a dragon femdom story.

I wrote something back in that thread but I didn't know anymore where to go with that story so I decided to start again from scratch.

Feedback is always appreciated

44ca87  No.388966

File: ef9a02a3d831036⋯.png (Spoiler Image, 759.62 KB, 1024x576, 16:9, Bg_hood_1.png)

File: 37085fbca1f8a68⋯.jpg (Spoiler Image, 46.03 KB, 564x900, 47:75, 3f24b0f26613fbef26bd0c1e92….jpg)

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File: f63c28273c418ec⋯.png (Spoiler Image, 1.06 MB, 1024x576, 16:9, Bg_yorktown_1.png)

File: 73905dd0b2d258d⋯.jpeg (Spoiler Image, 24.19 KB, 480x480, 1:1, 4daac9ea859b4c9597684aa12….jpeg)


Speaking of boat girls, I wrote this small short story. It's kind of sad so I will be spoilering it.

Imagine looking into your ship's eyes as she is sinking, desperately trying to hold on, it's too heavy and as she starts to pull you down you hear her start to gasp for air. You know you can't hold her up, you know this is your last moments together, but you can't bring yourself to let go. One of your other boat girls knows that if you keep holding on to her, you will die too… She does what she does not want to do. She pulls you away from your sinking boat girl. You struggle, kick, and scream orders at her to stop what she is doing but she defies them. She doesn’t want to lose you any more than you want to lose your sinking ship girl. As you are finally forced away from her you see her fall off into the cold black abyss of the ocean. You attempt to jump in after her, but your other boat girls stop you. You know it is too late. With tears in your eyes you embrace one of your other boat girls and blame yourself for her death. c-cupids exist for a reason, r-right guys?

eea486  No.388998

File: ee9b0b93022b1b4⋯.png (286.9 KB, 1000x669, 1000:669, aiko viccy.png)

Hello hi etc



Tags: MGE, Salamander, Bicorn, Yuri, FFM

Synopsis: A bicorn and a knight go into an abandoned castle in search of what their contractor demanded. In their search, they find a salamander down on her luck looking to beat them to what loot they must be after.

fe1d97  No.389054

YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.

3c7a17  No.389211

File: d95cad313e3f6a2⋯.png (1.06 MB, 980x1500, 49:75, 1437280342325-2.png)

Could anyone point me to the stories with the CEO anon and the snek girl? Take a smol tsun snek as payment

c46d24  No.389346

File: e4ccea850ff7903⋯.png (472.31 KB, 513x369, 57:41, 2f8fc2713173d8fde9f13f4341….png)


Well, it's been a few days but I finally got around to righting another update, I think this will be the ending of my first story. So what did you guys think? I hope it entertained you if nothing else.

a29888  No.389351

anyone here happen to have the one pastebin about the veteran and the catgirl and chesire?

de8820  No.389390

34a432  No.389405



Holy shit I remember this author and their stories. All of them are so fucking good but they always end up not finished. Like the veteran one doesn’t reveal stuff about what happened to him and where his wife went. It’s like their good but there’s never a resolution, every story ends on a cliffhanger that by going by when the stories were made are never going to be finished and satisfied. Is there any other place where the author put their stories, somewhere they might have finished them?

0bcfac  No.389556

Does anybody have a link to that story about an either hellhound or manticore pov that works in the mafia or something like that and buys a shota who is blind? I've been having a really hard time finding it.

3c7a17  No.389566

File: 502e08c18573e67⋯.png (884.24 KB, 1161x1920, 387:640, 75fe6d8e2edc1dbf940c791a35….png)

098c3c  No.389667

Reading all these makes me want to try to write one up. But I've never posted a story before so it'd probably be trash.

57a9e7  No.389668


Do it. Write it down, then edit it to fix mistakes and inconsistencies.

098c3c  No.389669


Well alright. I got an idea in my head I'll type it out when I get home. If I have the willpower I'll put it up on a pastebin.

5d81c5  No.389710

Are there any good, preferably non-lewd stories involving a griffon?

Also, I recall reading a story a year, year and a half or so ago about a space junker that gets captured by pirates led by a hellhound; I believe it was posted directly to a thread, no pastebin, but I cannot for the life of me find it.

8b15ab  No.389889


There was a short story about a thief trying to steal from a griffon’s hoard, but I don’t have the pastebin bookmarked.

55c896  No.390268



I had a moment of panic thinking I'd spelled griffin wrong multiple times in my story. Turns out it has multiple different spellings so we're both right.

I've posted my story a few different times across the write thread whenever I updated it. The previous thread should have the most up to date version. Ctrl+F griffin and you'll find it. I recommend the .pdf since that should have the most grammatical fixes and of course overall better presentation. If you've already read it, I hope you enjoyed it.

16c5d9  No.390536


stop teasing and update soon

9aa2cb  No.390604


dead link.

44ca87  No.390607

File: 700f14270129e19⋯.png (691.18 KB, 700x583, 700:583, 700f14270129e19ad0fb791ccb….png)

>This girl comes up to you on a comfy but hot Saturday evening while you are at a bar.

>"Hey kid, buy me a drink. You won't regret it."

>What do you do, /monster/?

fac3de  No.390608


Honestly the story was crap so I killed it

I have this issue with writing where I want to write whatever I'm writing in one go. For college assignments and whatnot this works fine but for stories they just end up being rushed


Buy her a drink obviously.

88b029  No.390614


Onis like whiskey too, yeah?

She better not be a jack-swilling pleb, though.

d530fb  No.390671


If she is going to drug and rayp me she ought to be buying, though I guess since it's for her she's going to get strong and do it anyways


I would like to see it resurrected

85e8b4  No.390723

File: 451b1f113da9f00⋯.jpg (165.57 KB, 800x1200, 2:3, 451b1f113da9f007fba7685d39….jpg)

got the idea from cleaning a rusty scissor with a rust remover spray

>you spray the dust remover all throughout the metal exterior

>her high pitched digital yelp breaks the silence

>one would think you would need to disable the circuits in order to clean better, without any interruption, and that is what mothers do to clean their daughters' insides

>your wife, however, refuses to do so

>she claims she doesn't like it, but, you being a human, she'd feel safer being able to tell instantly if you do anything wrong

>still, her lacks of commentary besides moans and cries makes you doubt her statements

>gently, you scrap the rust off

>next you clean it off with a rag

>the metal already looks shiny and clean

>you proceed further into her insides, gently cleaning her sensitive bits with care and an alcohol solution

>the first time you did this you thought you were sending her into a roller coaster of emotions

>as you got used to her you slowly learned that all those emotions were actually just pleasure

>as your cleaning goes on, the insides get cleaner, but the outside gets messier

>you apply the last bit of metal polish and look up at her face

>she can't resist any longer, and the sigh of her in this state never fails to make you want to indulge her

>you take her then and there, making full use of the wd-40 in her joints

>finally, she uses her legs to hold you in as you let yourself fall on top of her, basking in the afterglow and enjoying the faint vanilla scent coming from her insides

>you'll probably have to clean her again because of how messy it was

>and you wouldn't have it any other way

I don't want to fuck a scissor, I just want to clean an automaton in a lewd way.

b0f234  No.390771

File: dfe170eef269276⋯.jpeg (88.76 KB, 750x563, 750:563, shonan-junai-gumi-21e28f7….jpeg)

Alright guys, take it ez on me. I finally got the time to sit down for an hour or two to put down my idea. It ain't much. It probably feels rushed, but this is my first time so please enjoy if you can.


1fc3bc  No.390780

File: 898103663572985⋯.jpg (54.14 KB, 500x500, 1:1, POWER NUT.jpg)


>I just want to clean an automaton in a lewd way

Gonna end up needing one of these along the way

57a9e7  No.390799


>Bentou is just blocks of ice

Got a kek out of me, I like it.

That said, you gotta work on spacing whole paragraphs from each other. The end of the story where his sis gets decked had me a bit confused on who was being decked at first. You're well on your way anon, just watch out for random meme arrows and asterisks for actions.

134420  No.390811


Thanks I'll take your advice to heart for sure. Just glad I got someone to chickle.

85e929  No.390851

File: 245419d5f0ca4c5⋯.png (630.28 KB, 839x704, 839:704, lesswip.png)

Victory and Defeat, chapter 12. Last chapter, missing a little epilogue. Derrota's story is now basically done.


ac9713  No.391046


good shit and cute

52feaa  No.391163


Good, shit or cute? It can't be all three, Anon.

68cd84  No.391177

File: 613202ace39fd98⋯.gif (1.7 MB, 350x340, 35:34, 613202ace39fd981f6141a538b….gif)


I also enjoyed this, original story idea and solid writing.

69cbc7  No.391219

File: 24f3e61e6e75826⋯.png (1.36 MB, 2000x2500, 4:5, medusa.png)


Here's my short medusa story. Havn't done in writing in a long time, and I wrote half of it on my tablet so there's probably some errors I didn't see.

Also looking for some more writing prompts

1c747c  No.391243

YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.


Nice story. Kind of left me wanting more.

How about giving this a shot?



6f3249  No.391267

File: 8dd6d5d1b17c06e⋯.gif (692.97 KB, 582x250, 291:125, EvenWarmheartedCicada-smal….gif)


Ok guys here's the deal. I was just looking around some old computer stories I used to type up just for fun when I came across this one. It's got like 50000 or more words in it and this is just a 5000 word clipping from it.

I remember I was writing it out like a visual novel story where I'm typing up the common route and then was just gonna type up a route for each girl for the fun of it. It's taken heavy inspiration, if not just straight up ripped from Monster Musume and MGE but to suit my own plot I adjusted shit the way I wanted it.

If anyone actually says, "Hey, I'm interested in this. Put the rest of it on that pastebin so I can read about the other five girls and stuff man."

Then I'm definitely willing to do that, but I'm gunna read through and fix any grammer errors and shit first. If it sucks ass I'll just let it rot in my hardrive never to be seen again.

>tldr if you like it and want the 45000 other words let me know and I'll post it

9aa2cb  No.391272


Really good twist at the end, good characterization. You seem talented enough to make another chapter of this.

9aa2cb  No.391273


I do think you cut short the stalking phase a bit short for us yandere fans. Have you perchance written other medusa fics in the past?


sage fail…doh

69cbc7  No.391274


I have not written anything /monster/ related in the past. I've just been really into medusas recently.

1b9575  No.391284


I really enjoyed it. Would definitely read more of it if you decide to put it up.

6f3249  No.391285


Hey thanks bro. I'll see if I can't make a part two.


Glad to hear it man, really. Alright when I get home from work today I'll put the rest of it up.

fd4a35  No.391287


Cute. I liked how the serpants played a major role.

6f3249  No.391357

File: 2bc385c8addfccb⋯.gif (487.13 KB, 500x218, 250:109, original.gif)



Doin the pastebin again is probably retarded but who cares.

Alright after four hours of going through and fixing errors and other shit I posted everything I had typed up. Hell I might actually continue on with the story and update it now and then, readin it got me pumped up boys. I hope you all enjoy what I got so far, I'll post again when I finally finish this. Funny what you find at the bottom of your old documents folder.

c70b1f  No.391516

File: 0014ce526cde9cc⋯.webm (807.9 KB, 320x240, 4:3, Carrie.webm)


Carrie is best girl. She's a bit shy, but I bet she's a freak in bed.

At least during the day…

more seriously, I do hope you continue

6f3249  No.391517


That gif got me good. I'll try to type up a bunch this weekend. Maybe after I'm done just finishing off the common route I'll put a poll up to see what girl's route we should go down first. God I wish I could draw I woulda made this an actual VN.

1acd3b  No.391646



I do hope you're going to write a part where Ona apologizes to Zasha because that was just straight-up bitchy

6f3249  No.391647


Preesh man. We'll see, they do hate eachother. Maybe Bull will fix it maybe he wont. I doubt Ona's orc warrior pride would allow herself to say she's wrong after all.

6f3249  No.391777

File: aa035a0395255db⋯.gif (2.15 MB, 480x368, 30:23, CommonJoyousHarvestmen-siz….gif)


I finally Updated the story, haven't had any time between the 60 hours of OT , studies and gym. The common route is finished so I'm gunna start working on each girl's route. In fact I thought it'd be kind of fun to let anyone here who gives a shit about the story pick which route I was gunna write first.


Now I'm probably gunna just write fun and cutesy scenes for the routes so don't expect any 2deep4u feels or nail biting drama. I'm a hack and couldn't write that kind of shit up. It'll probably be more like an afterstory than anything of you think about it. I'll check the polls Friday and start writing whoever is top waifu.

775c9a  No.391783


I voted Chelsea but deep down I want the Zasha route too…

Fuck, I want them all actually

6f3249  No.391786


Don't sweat it man. I plan on doing them all, kind of like alternate time lines. If you guys like this stuff I don't mind to post all the ending as I finish each one's. I even have a secret one planned up. I'm real glad you liked it enough to vote though.

c70b1f  No.391794


Nice digits.

I voted. I'm looking forward to the next bit.

6f3249  No.391797


Thanks man, you guys turn this from me making this for shits and giggles to something I actually want to try amd make good.

775c9a  No.391810


Gorgon route? :^)

1b9575  No.391812


To be honest I have no idea who to pick. Fuck you for writing too many likable characters. But seriously good job

cd93d2  No.391840


that obvious huh?


Ha thanks man.

bb649e  No.391910


Awesome stuff man, voted for the banshee, I'm a sucker for sad lonely girls.



I wonder how she we'll react to the (you), here's hoping she will spill her spaghetti HARD.

6f3249  No.391914


me too

I have the beginning already thought out for that one but I wont spoil anything.

e1f9e3  No.391917


Ah fuck I accidentally voted Cindy, recount 1 please

6f3249  No.391920


Don't have an account. But I'll take a vote off Cindy on Friday and vote for who you want. Who did you want?

9aa2cb  No.392022


if you think it is crap, and don't know how to fix it, our writing will not improve until you get feedback.


MC is over the top, but in a fun way. why do i think that this will wind up more interesting than most MG VNs on patreon?

e7854d  No.392038


I hope it'll live up to your expectations. I wish I could draw, I would have put it in VN format for everyone.

69cbc7  No.392081

File: 586dd799b370960⋯.png (2.06 MB, 1600x2000, 4:5, wife.png)


Behold, more short stories I have written.

Mermaid story that was requested by a friend: https://pastebin.com/akt3UJNa

Anubis story: https://pastebin.com/pBd86gGb

I will warn that the anubis story includes light femdom elements and I've never really written a sex scene before this, but here it is.

Also updated the medusa story but I'm thinking about writing a lot more so I won't post it yet.

Also might work on a weresheep story from her point of view but I don't know if I'm feelin it. If someone says they're interested I'll probably go for it again.

ec5b9d  No.392088


Neato, thanks anon!

9b603d  No.392089

Could someone beta read this? I was told my series started from a boring place, so I thought this would be a better starting point.


68cd84  No.392090

File: 9261ae69ffc76f1⋯.jpg (49.73 KB, 685x960, 137:192, 9261ae69ffc76f1e2f57d9d286….jpg)


The medusa story was good anon. Keep up the work. As others said, neat use of head sneks.

40c1a0  No.392101


Nice job on your first sex scene, that was pretty good

e1f9e3  No.392103

File: e614d4e4acf5d81⋯.jpg (7.54 KB, 239x211, 239:211, Full Mast.jpg)


> “Oh, I love it when you struggle~”

I think I like Anubis's now. Bless you anon, that tugged at my heart strings

ce5c60  No.392119

File: 5113eae28d5c9df⋯.jpg (634.03 KB, 2006x1080, 1003:540, __grey_wolf_kemono_friends….jpg)


I found no basic spelling mistakes other than "kina" insted of "kind of" but im sure that was intentional. I can't help more than this since im not a native english speaker nor do i know anything about writefagging.

9b603d  No.392125


I was more asking how to tell the story better, but okay.

768681  No.392128


lots of run-on sentences and awkeard sentence structure.

as an example, "I look at the picture on my nightstand looking back was my husband and I holding a trophy as the first cursed gun to ever win a match."

Would read a lot better if it were. "I looked over at the picture on my nightstand. Staring back at me was my husband and I holding a trophy. I was the first cursed gun to win a match."

but even that is kind of clunky. A bit more description and prose would go a long way.

"With a heavy sigh, I shifted in my bed, looking over at the picture on my nightstand. Staring back at me was my husband with a smiling face. And there I was, by his side as always holding a trophy. I was the first cursed gun to win a match."

Also, its just a general opinion of mine, but stay away from present-tense. That's really more for screenplays and scripts. Whenever I read it outside of those it just looks horribly unprofessional and reads awkwardly

768681  No.392129


I can't edit my post, but there should be a comma after "always" in my last example. Also awkward is spelled wrong in the first sentence.

ad4e2d  No.392131


>yes, yes I am

I like it.

079ed2  No.392133

Finally was convinced to write and post. Just a super short story about a guy and his kitsune GF.


Any feedback or suggestions would be appreciated

6f3249  No.392141


Sick story man. I'd definitely read any others you made. Got a laugh and a warm feeling. That's a goody.

69cbc7  No.392153

File: 1143e9facca0ea6⋯.jpg (37.93 KB, 540x572, 135:143, HELP.jpg)






Glad people like it, I'll try to keep the good stuff going.

6f3249  No.392156

File: b2e1052123ef8b9⋯.jpg (699.83 KB, 1124x1230, 562:615, 20190403_214355.jpg)



The sequal "only one guy who probably gave up all interest in seeing it after all this time" has asked for. Just a little after story. May or may not be good I used a few lunch breaks to type it and read over it.

2a395d  No.392162

I´d like to see a story with a "Going his Own Way" commentator getting proactively dated mid show.

>"ALL MAMONO ARE THOTS PRE SUFFRAGETTES!!! You think your waifu loves you? Wait until she gets voting rights! She´ll take you to Divorce Court faster than you can say "B… But my spirit mana…" "

>"Fools are falling head over heels for these bitches! They think "Finally, a woman with common sense! We don´t have to take our women´s rights, folks!", but´s that´s just the rub. They figured out the fastest way to strip a man from his resources a long time ago, and that´s chameleon… Wait, what´s that noise on my window? Hold on a sec…"

69cbc7  No.392464

File: 2ac7f37c1a255d8⋯.png (339.46 KB, 982x1025, 982:1025, 2ac7f37c1a255d8288e3b10548….png)



Here's the continuation of the medusa story for anyone who asked for it. Maybe I'll keep it going, not sure yet.

Feedback appreciated I suppose.

0a7508  No.392469


Where's the pastebin, banchou-bro? You holding out on us?!

6f3249  No.392470

File: c4b848828704308⋯.jpg (14.27 KB, 500x217, 500:217, large.jpg)


Holy shit brahsky I didn't even notice.


Sorry to cock tease everyone like that.


Bernadette won, I'll start workin on her route but I got shot in the leg so I might be a little destracted.

5039b8  No.392472



6f3249  No.392484

File: f5c81d2f5f677c7⋯.jpg (1.11 MB, 2560x1440, 16:9, 20190405_202456.jpg)


Now I have some good info about bein shot though. Thanks for reading my shit guys. I got a fracture in the femur from the bullet so I'll have to type shit on the phone since 90 degree angles suck right now. It'll be a bit slower cause of that.

5039b8  No.392489


ok take your time… baka

0a7508  No.392490


Life imitates art, or something like that. Just don't die!

75e91b  No.392492

File: c278ec18a2e7b4e⋯.jpg (198.4 KB, 525x861, 25:41, edf604b6cbe629718898ce5b9c….jpg)


Did you accidentally shoot yourself setting your gun down?

f2a243  No.392494


man, /monster/ is one crazy place.

Praying for you anon. Hope you get better soon

6f3249  No.392495

File: 9a7d61c69a39f83⋯.jpeg (3.28 KB, 152x158, 76:79, download (1).jpeg)


Niggers just are pussies that's all I'll say. Only get into a fistfight with other white guys. I'm lucky as hell though, clean fracture, missed anything important. Not trying to blog guys sorry.

7312ae  No.392507


Holy shit are you ok anon?

30d7ef  No.392508


>Writefag got shot by a nigger

Fucks sake niggers and kikes really are why we can't have nice things, even here.

7312ae  No.392511


Well what did you expect?

68cd84  No.392513

File: 9688c7fbd346cdc⋯.jpg (45.71 KB, 680x383, 680:383, 9688c7fbd346cdcdb7d9cd2b6a….jpg)


Damn son, heal up.

6f3249  No.392515

File: 54d33f8cd54a3fc⋯.png (301.07 KB, 350x589, 350:589, Crying2.png)




Thanks guys. It's really wasn'r as bad as I thought it'd be you know? I mean it hurt like fuck but I was still able to keep calm and crack jokes. Panicing woulda bleed my ass out quicker after all. Does anyone have any pastebins or greentexts for monster girl nursing their potential husband back to health? Top points if they're: arachnie, Yuki-Onna, undead girl, harpy

I love Chrome

c70b1f  No.392530


What caliber? I need to know for science.

6f3249  No.392532

File: ffa26f6af56e830⋯.png (1.42 MB, 1194x1617, 398:539, ffa.png)


>Hi-Point. .40. (Imagine that) 20 dolla problem solva

The dumbass didn't know shit about guns, he pulled it out of his pants to show off how thug he was and it went off at my leg. He looked like he pissed himself and ran off. I could tell by his face and how he ran off afterwards he didn't even mean to shoot the damn thing. For real done blogging this time just a bit pissed and need to seethe at something sorry guys.

68cd84  No.392533


Its fine considering the circumstantial circumstances

a372f7  No.392545


Not an arachne, but I've got an Ushi-Oni one by Ace: https://pastebin.com/NMyy5fiN/

6f3249  No.392562


That was nice, thanks man.

c70b1f  No.392573


I'm enjoying it, and I want more matchmaking shenanigans.

44ca87  No.392590

File: 8b7a1d900ee373e⋯.jpg (97.58 KB, 500x627, 500:627, 8b7a1d900ee373e12e46caf69f….jpg)


The best girl in that god forsaken game. She doesn't have any disgusting scenes, as far as I am aware.


Nice story. I can't say I've ever been a large fan of spider girls but this was a pretty cute story. I recall reading this other story about a young man in Zipangu getting capture by an Ushi Oni. The only thing I can remember about it is both of the young man's parents were samurai and his mom gets turned into an Ushi Oni. Does anyone have this story?

69cbc7  No.392786

File: 2939e7c0585e7ef⋯.png (3.35 MB, 1777x2300, 1777:2300, Medusa.png)


Glad you're enjoying it.

Here's the third version of the medusa story I've been writing.


Feedback and comments appreciated as always

0a7508  No.392800

I've seen quite a few monstergirl stories in my time but even so I've found the Sabbath, or just lolis in general, to be quite underrepresented. When they are featured it's usually in humorous one offs or as side characters to the greater story. Does anyone have any stories that feature them as the main romantic interest? Or is this just one of those things that just doesn't have a lot of demand?

Or option C: I get off my ass and write my own story.

32f8d3  No.392802


Why are loli monstergirls so underrepresented? Because they're lolis. Certain people get buttmad like crazy if you try and have a serious thread about them. They inevitably troll and call everyone pedos and cause the threads to spiral into shit slinging. You might be able to pull one off if you're very iron-fisted about shit posting and anti-pedo posting in the OP.

32f8d3  No.392803



There's also the fact that lolis are niche in an already niche genre (monstergirls). So that means an even smaller potential audience, to begin with. You could probably mostly get around this if the story is especially well written.

32f8d3  No.392805



For example:

I saw a Redcap appear in a CYOA story just recently, and someone started crying about it being a loli monstergirl instead of an adult-looking monstergirl variety.

0c7bdc  No.392818


I got you fam: https://pastebin.com/nYAePkDg

shillin' my own work. Features loli Baphomet doctor healing a Dark Knight Anon.

6f3249  No.392846


That was good stuff my man. Thanks for posting it.

1f4c0b  No.392867


Oh I remember this, this is really good Anon and I hope you write more stories about the sabbath, because lolis are definitely underrepresented.

99aa1c  No.392903


actually good

0a7508  No.392907


Much thanks for the story, anon!

d92327  No.392908



Oh hey, that story. Man I haven't written anything but Wizardquest stuff in awhile, huh?

Let's see what it's in relation to-

>Gunshot wound

Holy fuck, glad to see you're okay tho. Only other medical related story I have the Code Wight, but I'm not certain it fits with what you're looking for. Get healed up soon, friendo.


Which CYOA? I don't think I've had people cause a fuss about a loli character in one of those before…


This thread is encouraged to shill, yo.

4b116a  No.392959


Good shit mate, hope to read more from you.

0404da  No.393217


Also good shit. I was never much of a fan for lolis but this one tickled me in a way. Also damn you for now having a damn fascination on those damned smug goats!

69cbc7  No.393231

File: 3e9e8eb0ce55a21⋯.png (999.07 KB, 1161x1595, 1161:1595, floof.png)


Hello, here is more garbage I have written as I take a break from the medusa story.


Didn't use MGE as a base for once and wrote it from the kitsune's point of view.

I'll be getting back to finishing up Anon and Selene's story soon enough for any of you that care.

97efb3  No.393252


m8 why not make an account for all these?

0c7bdc  No.393258

File: 51412e5e5851c3b⋯.jpg (1.32 MB, 1291x1693, 1291:1693, TelosAwoo by Negresco.jpg)


fairly rough criticism spoilered:

You mentionned that this was written as a "break", and sadly, it shows. The story isn't bad, but it's bland, there is no surprise, nothing that makes it stand out. On the good points, I haven't noticed a single mistake, be it spelling or grammar, so that's actually great.

As a short story written to relax, it does its job and I'm sure some Anons just enjoy these kind of things, but I'm definitely more demanding.






Huge thanks to all of you for reading and commenting, please don't hesitate to tell me what parts you liked best or even the weaker ones, you guys are amazing and I wish you the best.

Funnily enough I actually don't like the Baphs that much, so while I will write more about Sabbath and lolis, I don't think SmugGoats will be part of it.

In fact, my next work will feature a (loli)DarkElf, it should be done before the week-end.

Have a great one, monster-fuckers.

69cbc7  No.393261


I have them saved elsewhere, but I can make an account to help other people keep track of my work.


I honestly debated posting it in the first place, as it was just supposed to be a cute little thing and some practice before I get into the heavier shit in my main project.

I'll keep what you said in mind the next time I work on a shorter story.

0c7bdc  No.393263


Don't worry about it, writing like we do here should be a hobby one does for fun.

You can concern yourself with top quality when you plan on publishing stories more seriously.

69cbc7  No.393265


I'm really just happy people actually read what I write! I can't get my friends to read my more serious writings which is pretty disheartening. Especially when you worked on it for like a year. /blogpost

8e6e38  No.393269

File: 62b932053a8a22b⋯.jpg (40.13 KB, 600x690, 20:23, cb6.jpg)


I will say this, while eternal loli™ is nice and all, blood related incest is still fucked.

Futhermore dicking the blood related loli-aged loli is /gas/-tier.

Not telling you what to do, just a reminder.

0c7bdc  No.393270


I see, you are a man of culture as well.

Have no fear, my set of rules is kinda loose as I'd write about a lot of weird shit, but I'd never writefag about: incest or underaged children. So yeah… /monster/ core values, no /d/ or /chaos/.

706f8e  No.393318

what ever happened to my boi bromont, haven't read his shit in years but I cant seem to track down his pastebin or whatevs

16c5d9  No.393422


The yandere subtones where left hanging

The mc just went with the flow with little resistance in my opinion.

But I liked nevertheless

919734  No.393487

Hello everyone. >>388238 here, two months on-and-off, I finally fucking conquered my laziness, and got that larger project of mine done. Time for some green-skinned-space-babe-babymaking!


I don't care how bad any mistakes are or if things are inconsistent, I thank Mama Reitia that I actually finished this project this time!

6f3249  No.393489

File: c0d57fe05678442⋯.png (567.98 KB, 741x1222, 57:94, 1412580964845.png)

Hey fuckers I wrote this up on my phone and read over it a couple times and I got something half complete on the back burner but jesus fuck typing on your phone sucks man. I'm gunna see the doc tomorrow and if the news on the fracture is good I'll sit at my computer and finish the Bernadette story.



Here's your theme bro


919734  No.393508


get a targus bluetooth keyboard, it's much better for phone typing.

>that vid


7312ae  No.393532


It was pretty good anon. My only complaint is that this nihilus character seemed overly vague, as well as their reasons for being afraid of him and russet leaving. Their reaction when the video hit the news seemed over the top because we didn’t know why he had so many powerful enemies. We knew he had served in the navy for a brief while and did operations against pirates but that seems to be the extent of it.dont get me wrong I liked it, the ending just felt a little hamfisted

ce5c60  No.393548

File: 46ccaa4a87c219f⋯.gif (2.47 MB, 200x200, 1:1, Nut meltdown.gif)



713196  No.393594


I thought I had made it apparent with the breadcrumbs I've scatted throughout the story that Russet personally pissed off an abusive asshole dictator who has a soviet-tier hard-on for military equipment and force.. It honestly makes me regret not keeping something I cut in the end: Where Russet reveals his Navy experience is in fact as a teenage conscript of the Nihilus Legion.

Another flaw in this story, is that I feel I should've dropped more hints that Russet is being a deliberately unreliable narrator. I'm not sure how I would've done that though.


I'm glad you enjoyed it.

7312ae  No.393616


I got that he was some kind of dictator or pirate lord, but I didn’t understand why they were so scared of him, I don’t recall anything that indicated how powerful he really was or anything showing how ruthless he was willing to be that would explain why they were so terrified of him.

Maybe it was just cause I was a bit short on sleep I didn’t notice but that’s what it seemed like.

8db0f0  No.393685

File: 06d2f9e5b5ba1d5⋯.jpg (185.79 KB, 971x1376, 971:1376, TelosXenoBladeC2 NkeToumi.jpg)


As promised: https://pastebin.com/WuX9qCp8 Anon is a slave to a beautiful and greedy Dark Elf, but said greed is eventually punished.

Contains a loli-fied Dark Elf getting the dicking of her long-life and enjoying it thoroughly

I hope you'll enjoy it, as always, please do voice your opinion so I can improve.

Have a great one, waifus watch over you.

Tiny-bonus blogpost: The DElf's design and name are an obvious reference to pic related. Also, holy fuck, I re-wrote the first 3 pages at least 5 timesin the hope of giving to story it's own little dynamism, all of that only to not leave a good moment to add a blow-job scene I really wanted to write (because loli bj's are my fetish. Might just edit it in later.



Just in time for Easter?

5d81c5  No.393789


Finally got around to finishing it. It was good, but I did notice some grammatical errors in it, especially in the last chapter. Are there any plans to continue it? Seems like an odd place to end the story.

Also, I would love if someone could help me out with my other inquiry >>389710

69cbc7  No.393841

File: 67e5eed32584100⋯.png (1.58 MB, 1080x1920, 9:16, 1541725487464-d.png)


Finally finished the medusa story.


Hope you guys like it!

55c896  No.393843


>plans to continue

I would like to finish it since it is my first proper written story. I have a few different ways I could take the story but I need to go over my outline and refine it some more since I want a good ending even if it isn't necessarily a happy one. Glad you liked it.

I remember fixing a lot of the grammatical issues in the latest chapter recently but I haven't bothered updating the .pdf yet. I'll showcase those fixes with the release of the next chapter…whenever that is

>space junker hellhound

Does not ring a bell but it sound like it might be cool.

86aee4  No.393900

File: fa0118f8705f735⋯.png (1.35 MB, 1450x1215, 290:243, Victoria5 (lowres) - .less.png)

Hello. Finished writing the epilogue of Victory and Defeat, which marks the end of both Victoria and Derrota's stories. Hard to believe All's Fair in Love and War started back in '16. Because it's the end of the story, I'll post again the starting chapters of both stories.

Victory and Defeat, Chapter 13


Victory and Defeat, Chapter 1


All's Fair in Love and War, Chapter 1


In theory, I'm done writing. I'd still want to rewrite Victoria's story, but it's not as critical as finishing an incomplete story.

57199e  No.393959


Would the board be interested in soft-KC-canon stories about a band of knights hunting monsters in their pre-Demon Lord forms? I could properly try and tie it in to canon if possible.

I'd really like to write for this place again but I'm not really of a mind to write full-on smut.

57199e  No.393961


To expand on this a little bit, I'm thinking of a setting wherein some monsters have reverted back to their monstrous forms and are causing trouble, and either the towns or the husbands themselves are hiring a group of professional monster hunters from the pre-Demon Lord days to capture the girls for treatment. That basic concept could be taken into a number of different settings, I think - just give me a monster and a setting idea and I'm good to go.

The sexual stuff would probably stay at a minimum though, so I'd really like to gauge reaction to this.

738402  No.393967


I'd say go for it, always good to have more OC on here, as long as it isn't some /chaos/ bullshit

24f8af  No.393973

File: d8c0fa9b4c6018c⋯.png (63.72 KB, 468x576, 13:16, white power symbol.png)


Disgustingly saccharine, disturbingly wholesome, and dangerously cheesy…I like it.

The first few paragraphs remind me of something I wrote in the greentext threads.

b3e357  No.393980


Also good story. Medusas are underrated within the lamia catergory of Mge stories and this was really comfy to read.

4f74a6  No.394051

24f8af  No.394099



I remember that story anon. It had a space-cop/AI duo who are captured by MG space pirates who use our space cop hero as some twisted reverse harem, with the hellhound captain as the main love interest. AI is killed off in the last part that appeared here, but I don't recall the writer continuing from that point.


You're giving me some good ideas Anon.

f22d09  No.394129



Dude wrote a fuck ton of stuff back when, but I haven't seen them around for a few years now :(

579977  No.394137


>In theory, I'm done writing.

I'll really miss your work. Stick around at least. Hopefully your muse will return, if not for /monster/ content than for something else.

fe454b  No.394240


It's been fun Los! I'm happy that you've stuck with us this long, and thank you for your contribution. The last three years have really flown by.

f2a243  No.394258


he's in the thread with the guy who wrote a book

67f2b8  No.394274

File: 3cc1d9ed5d32276⋯.jpg (134.54 KB, 1024x746, 512:373, land raider.jpg)

Couple ideas I've been thinking about.

>Machine Spirit of a tank that's in love with an IG operator, but has trouble conveying this.

>Monster mom dealing with autistic son not being able to handle physical contact(or dad with autistic daughter)

>Young warrior tries to avenge his barbarian father, who died at the hands of the local vampire, but get's beaten repeatedly and receives escalating and embarrassing punishments.

>Future setting where Humanity forms a collation with monster races and each star trek-Esq ship is captained by a human and an alien wife.

<The wife is actually the entire ship.

>Lich runs a modern-day apothecary that helps people with various problems


>A long form story about monster girl fantasy.

>Starts with the hero betraying humanity, joining the Demon Queen, and killing off his party.

>His adoptive brother, who was more civic minded, leads the counter attack and instigates social reforms to counter monsters.

>One of these would be an order of knights drawing recruits from refugee men in exchange for giving their families shelter.

>They'd all carry around a book where they'd meticulously document the threat.

I've been reading up a little on Rome.

310094  No.394277


I don't keep track of pastebins or folders or anything like that. I know there's a couple anons that do, but I've got no way to point you in their general direction. I've quit threads/stories for a while now, so there's nothing new to add, and you haven't missed anything.

fd4b70  No.394278


Why "kill off" that party when you can marry them off to monstergirls most befitting their #1 sexual/romantic preferences? One must consider all the potential angles after all? Why fight when you can win without firing a single shot?

b6021d  No.394288


Because if they're dyed-in-the-wool Orderlings, they'd attack him en masse as soon as they realize his defection? He probably doesn't get a choice.

40c1a0  No.394304


That doesn’t eliminate his non-lethal methods of elimination. Hell, if his new demon lord gf has a demon silver weapon of any sort laying around, he could just use that. Or he could use the rest of her court staff to ambush them all at once and immediately subdue them.

40c1a0  No.394306


>monster mom dealing with autistic son

Well there’s always mindflayers as a last-ditch option, but I assume she’d try anything else before that.

8342f9  No.394372

Marine Anon, gonna give another shot at writing again, all advice or criticism is welcome.

>be me, 0621 instructor standing at the top of hands and knees.

>Smoking a cigarette while watching all the junior Marines complain while crawling up hill.

>It's not that fucking hard, it's only 4 miles, you mostly walk up the hills anyway.

>It's not that fucking cold, no you can't wear your sweat top tomorrow.

>It's not that fucking early, 0530 wake up call is the norm in the Maine corps.

>How does each new group of Marines get lazier then the last?

>I look down at everyone struggling up the lose sand, sinking deeper with each step.

>I hate every single on of you so fucking much and it's the first day of class.

>Still gotta pick leadership though, I'll probably pick the PT stud as the the guide.

>I'll free ball the rest or something, I'm sure the motivated few will stand out.

>The first one to get up here is a zombie girl, PFC Cartwright, she gave a weak rah before putting her hands on her head.

>Wasn't aware the undead could sweat or breathe heavy, good to know.

Cartwright, what's your PFT? You're not that tall so you lose some points there.

>Between the heavy breathing she said she gets like 10 pull ups, 19 something 3 mile and max crunches.

>God damn, that almost impressed me, but being as short and skinny as she was, it wasn't unbelievable.

Alright, you made the cut. You're guide, now that doesn't mean it's set in stone. I'll switch you out in a heart beat if you aren't squared away.

>Give her a short brief on what the position means, being the example for everything, PT, studies, personal standers, all that.

>I didn't expect to much, she was probably gonna be switched out in the first few weeks.

>Still, she did stand a bit taller after she got the position.

>Said that is the first leadership role she's ever gotten. Said she won't let me down.

>I had my doubt about the last part, but, I was happy to know she'd take it seriously.

>I had to keep my eye on her, if she manged not to be a total fuck up, she might get meritorious Lance.

>Hell, shes even running back down to encourage the fat bodies.

>Maybe this class won't be that bad after all.

>Another cigarettes later everyone slowly makes it up, that last being a red oni girl.

>She's drenched in sweat and breathing so heavy she just might fucking die.


>I asked her name, because looking at her, I know for a fact she's gonna fail weigh ins.

>PVT Maxim, a Marine brat, I heard her brag about her Warren officer dad a few times.

>You'd think she would be in better shape, but I guess not.

>I stand back up, flick the butt of my last cigarette before facing my TSOC.

>I let them rest for awhile, telling Cartwright to stick with Maxim to make sure she doesn't actually die.

Alright, now for the run back, no one better fall out. This is almost all down hill so just keep up with me and it should be easy.

>With that I turn and start to run, everyone following me down the sharp decline back to barracks.

>I decided to cut them some slack and kept it at an easy cool down pace.

>No one else falls out, Maxim is pushed to her limits by my guide and nearly passes out when we stop.

>All in all, pretty good PT for the first day.

Okay, it's 0655 right now I want you formed up and ready to step at 0745, fall out.

69cbc7  No.394529

File: f52e51beab143d5⋯.jpg (3.63 MB, 4141x3638, 4141:3638, qt angel.jpg)



Glad you both liked it.


Wrote a short story to try and pull myself out of writers block, not really sure what I want to do new after having dropped like five ideas within two weeks. The tones gonna be a lot different than my previous writings, hope you guys like it.

1f7ece  No.394551


god I love .Less's art

fac3de  No.394590

File: 40e731de516eb18⋯.jpg (59.27 KB, 682x599, 682:599, succubutt infiltration.jpg)

Are there any stories of monstergirls using magical sleep/hypnosis/mind control while pro-actively dating their future husbands?

Seems like something that has plenty of potential: medieval fantasy setting, anon the military commander is preparing to counter an incoming mamono invasion, gets lewd dreams while in reality he's being violated by a succubus every night as anon becomes less and less willing to properly counter the invasion and instead ensures that his army will fall with as few casualties on both sides as possible. I think a succubus would be pervert for the story. Magic and the ability to fly should greatly help with infiltrating anon's quarters. First she would make sure he stays asleep using her magic. Then she'd straddle Anon and make him dream in which she'd appear and introduce herself. Kissing, etc would mostly reflect and various other lewd acts would mostly reflect what is actually happening in real life. I'm rambling, maybe I'm just a pervert who likes the idea of a cute sweetheart violating me in my sleep, I dunno.

0b019a  No.394599


>I think a succubus would be pervert for the story

The unintentional pun. But yeah, seconding this

a59062  No.394601


Nightmares enter the dreams of the man they are interested in.

46d4a4  No.394602

File: 8b28b7c60ca9f7f⋯.jpg (237.25 KB, 1000x1000, 1:1, image.jpg)

File: 8b6dea45a8e4bcc⋯.jpg (60.8 KB, 605x559, 605:559, image.jpg)

File: 0e2ce2b76571591⋯.jpg (1.98 MB, 4592x5872, 287:367, image.jpg)

File: c828e3ff148ec77⋯.jpg (442.95 KB, 2000x2000, 1:1, image.jpg)

File: 554142c9e3fa239⋯.jpg (319.47 KB, 1435x1023, 1435:1023, image.jpg)


>autistic son not being able to handle physical contact

Why'd you have to remind me of me, anon?

Nothing's actually happened to me that would cause it, but I can't help but immediately dodge any sudden attempt at physical contact, including handshakes, hugs, and kisses.

Can't stop me from romanticising spontaneous physical displays of affection, though.

a6b86d  No.394680

Figure I'll just post the pastebin link since it's where I'll be posting all the silly shit i type up. Be warned they aren't long stories, just brief moments that were too good for me to not write down while I could.


70fe89  No.394735



>Be commo pog

>Am faggot

Why are Soldiers always stealing my waifus?!?!

70fe89  No.394736


Oh, god I read this trash after commenting, so I had to comment again to let you know this is trash. Exactly no one cares that you fumbled your way through boot. We all did, faggot, that's why we all know it isn't special and no one gives a shit. Pick something else to talk about. You just sound retarded.

fd4b70  No.394762


Anyone who says that wholesomeness and cheese are just objectively bad are not worth paying attention to. Nihilism has no place here!

3c7a17  No.394769


>We all did

What are you, part of some 3rd world country?

1fec4c  No.394778


Why are fags better at American imperialism than DA TROOPS?

04f0be  No.394934


>We all did

Nigger the last time I checked this was Reddit you cock sucking homo.

16c5d9  No.394935


This was fucking cute.

I love this kind of short stories

5fc305  No.394937


Ah so you're the one who wrote the shedding story. But all in all I'd enjoyed reading it. I like the slice of life aspect between the MC and MG waifu.

49e2ca  No.394962

Does anyone have a copy of "Open (kunoichi, MGEverse, lewd)" by HumbleSacrifice?


That's the link, but the guy nagasaki'd his pastebin and all his stories.

41c96b  No.395301


Why did he do that? That story and the one with the spider are very good

dfb9cc  No.395307


Authors have a tendency to throw petulant shitfits at the slightest provocation.

dfb9cc  No.395310

Writing prompt I plan on maybe using later for a multi-part piece. Putting it here so I don't forget.

The crew (mix of monster and human) of a small freighter find a strange life pod broadcasting a faint signal in dead space. Inside they find a single half-dead man with extensive bionics.

8d468d  No.395472


He recently posted a new story.


Wonder if he's still around then?

56a304  No.395490


>Orgasm denialfags BTFO


68691d  No.395492


Did he had a cave spider story? (guy trying to set up bombs for the detonation of a cave full of spiders, but got proactive'd in the end)

Damn, i've been searching for that one-shot for so long, didn't know it may have been there

e97944  No.395498


Well, fuck. It's been nearly three years. Good to know he's still kicking. Thanks for the heads up.

c46d24  No.395512

File: b672ea3a71f8dd8⋯.png (7.95 KB, 490x60, 49:6, Huh.PNG)


1,150 people looked at my shitty writing?

55c896  No.395514


I've been told bots troll paste-bin. Organically you can expect at least 100 or so folks at most from /monster/ unless there's someone spreading your content outside the board.

8b15ab  No.395535

File: 40017e20393617f⋯.jpeg (166.39 KB, 751x607, 751:607, 7F593365-5166-4547-A8D6-2….jpeg)


>just get into It’s Not the Fall That Kills You

>last chapter is nearing 4 years ago with no ending

d92327  No.395632

File: d285b067a718342⋯.png (2.69 MB, 1041x1383, 347:461, WQCoversmall.jpg.png)

Hey everyone! I know I've been mostly in my corner doing my current CYOA, but I finally got the edits done for Wizardquest 1 and published it! If y'all read it before or wanted to read it, here's a much, much easier to read version than the initial version. Thanks to y'all who participated in the past and helped this happen.

The ebook is on amazon if you want to pick it up while the hardback I'm still waiting on the proof copy before I can start selling, etc.


shilling over, thanks.

fd4b70  No.395667


That's a nice looking cover, and 80 percent of the buy decision is based on the cover so kudos on knowing where to expend your resources in the indie pub game.

Assuming it has done its job admirably, there's the last 20 percent, the pitch, the words on the back cover and/or the inside the front cover. Sell me my dude, because a few pew pew faggy 'umie mages about to get beaten down hardcore by a sexy Minotaur lady has my interest, can ya complete the "circuit" as it were and attract my attention though? I hope you deem it worthy of an attempt.

dbcc89  No.395735



I am interested in a pitch as well. I'm curious about the way the game plays, dice system, mechanics, etc. How does it compare to D&D 2e, 5e, GURPS or any other popular system?

I don't think I could get a game together but I love collecting table top systems

7312ae  No.395737



Are you two new or do you just have difficulty reading? This is an ebook of the CYOA Ace did years ago. It’s not an rpg manual. And if you want the pitch or blurb or summary or whatever you call it on the back there is a brief description you can read if you would click on the link to the ebook.

dbcc89  No.395740


Nah, just brain damage. My bad.

6b3cb8  No.395772


Very well Hero. As the other guy said, it is a clean up and printing of the first CYOA i ran here in… fuck it was 2015.

Wizardquest is a story of a man who reached the age of thirty as a virgin and became a Wizard with great powers. Content to stay at home and shitweave, he is forced to go on a quest when a hero breaks his communion glass. The outside world is dangerous however as it is filled with Monstergirls who would love nothing more than to rape him- and thus rob him of his magic forever.

The journey takes him far farther than he could imagine in this rich adventure filled with vibrant characters, a driving story, and rich humor.

Hailed by some as "The progenitor of a new kind of fantasy novel: Low Brow Fantasy" this story digs into some potty humor from our erstwhile hero, yet somehow it manages to fit will and give more life to the setting.

So please, consider purchasing this novel which clocks in at an impressive size that will leave you entertained for quite some time! Artwork included at the back of the book showing off many of the characters.

Okay, how's that?

25df17  No.395777



Yep hw made that one. This is not acceptable! Did he really just say "fuck it" and burned all his work or was it just a mistake?

dbcc89  No.395781

File: 0c3357873dec533⋯.jpg (133.13 KB, 494x500, 247:250, eat da rainbow.jpg)


You've sold me on it

Will pick it up when I have the chance to read

fd4b70  No.395803


Pretty good given the target audience. Get/keep magic powers or get laid roughly by sexy sexy monstergirls. Tough call. Don't ask for people to consider things though. Not a good marketing tactic. Find a better way to put that one.

Sounds kinda like an old raunchy pulp fiction piece as well. That's a good thing. Those bad boys sold like hotcakes back in their day. They're better than the BS coming out of the mainstream now by several country miles that's for sure.

1c6930  No.395813


I recently read wizardquest and illusionquest on tft. Good stuff. Will most likely buy a hardback when it becomes available.

Do you plan to release the other stories as books as well?

e496ae  No.395848


Aight! Ill drop the humility. Buy my book :^)


Thanks! I need to figure out how to price the hardback because its expensive to print. I'll have more info wednesday. Also, I'll eventually do the rest, but it takes me forever to edit and I'd like to put out a small short story anthology including the epilogue. I didn't have space for it, sadly. Thanks for reading though! Please leave a review. :^)

55c896  No.395888


>120+ chapters

>7 dollary doos

That's a lot of content packed in there. I went ahead and purchased a copy. Once I've read enough of it to give it a proper take I'll give you the fairest review I can manage.

d92327  No.395897


Thanks trips hitler

Leave a review too :^) Though apparently the reviews don't show for people who don't shop amazon for other stuff which is weird but makes sense.

dbcc89  No.395911

File: 00e8a69655defe8⋯.jpg (132.52 KB, 590x590, 1:1, 00e8a69655defe8eff2d967025….jpg)


Hi, I'm back to show you all more of my cheesy schlock. Hope you enjoy it.


Feedback is appreciated and all that.

Should I actually name the MC? I'm not sure you can connect as much to a character I name 'Anon'

702d36  No.396586

Cross-posting here since the Hellhound thread seems dead:

The Mad Dog of The Apocalypse

A hellhound stalked John Milcorren. He knew running would accomplish nothing. He would never make it to town, no matter how fast his horse could carry him.

Less Than An Hour Earlier

From his soft leather chair, John first noticed the destruction as a shadow from the corner of his eye, a soft and sudden dimming of daylight. Darkness had begun to eclipse the skyline visible from his cabin window. A smudge of black haze in the distance marred the beautiful spring mid-morning, stretching from fine points on the ground, houses probably, to a single broad swath in the sky. The town, a few distant miles away, burned.

With luck, it would be only a spreading fire. Perhaps the result of some crone’s careless housekeeping or cooking had started it, or perhaps an errant coal kicked too far from the hearth or a lamp knocked into dry bedding. In that case, people, buildings, and possessions could be saved with enough swiftly delivered of manpower and technique. A simple fire held neither intelligence nor animosity. The alternative, much as he despaired to consider it, meant a far greater and more meaningful loss, and could only be quelled by the ultimately futile response of the Lord’s Hussars from another few miles to the north. Were that the case, as quick as they were, they would arrive to find the town’s militia slaughtered almost to a man. The Eastern Barbarian Tribesmen were not keen on taking prisoners… Only plunder.

As John pulled his crutch to his side with one hand, he positioned his wooden leg in front of him, ready to squarely carry the burden of his weight. The real one, the one it was meant to replace, had been taken from him last year which hastened his departure from military life. He set his crutch firmly onto the floor like an old wizard pounding his staff. Pushing against the armrest with his right hand, and pulling on his crutch with the other, he stood. He could still do that, at least. He was not an old man by any stretch of the imagination, but the war with the Tribesmen, and against the Varigath Warband before that, and a dozen other skirmishes along the borderland of the Empire had all robbed him of any sense youthfulness among other things. Constant warfare from the dawn of his youth had chewed him up and spit him out. He had been like lamb entering a meat grinder. He had come out as pulverized mutton with a wooden leg, some medals, and a small pension.

Collecting his well-worn arming-sword and shield from the mantle above his hearth, John strapped the kit to his back and made his way out his cabin door, securing it behind him. He saddled up to his sturdy but small draught-horse Tess, taking care to position himself in the stirrups without dislodging or otherwise misaligning his wooden leg. His first stop would be to his small homestead’s well where he kept an old wooden bucket. It might be useful in the hopeful event that he needed to join the townsfolk in quashing a simple fire. His sword and shield would only be cold comforts in the event of Barbarians or other Tribesmen. With a crutch under one arm, he couldn’t possibly wield both at once. Worse yet, years of continuous training had gone fallow over the past year in favor of chopping wood and hauling grain. His armaments would reassure him, but were capable of little else in his weathered hands.

ab5d76  No.396587

Still, in that event, his best chance of survival would be joining the townsfolk in their pitiful resistance. His home could be clearly seen from the town, just as he could clearly see the town burn in the distance. Staying at his homestead while the town withstood attack would leave him vulnerable and alone, a surest death as if he had fallen on his own sword. But that was not his reason in going. He did not fear death. No… Many days he welcomed it. He took perverse pleasure in reliving fantasies day after day of dying in battle, heroically on his feet. It was sweet fantasy a world apart from his present hell of dying one piece at a time. He would to defend the town because it was expected of him as a Soldier, not because of any safety it brought, and always in the hopes that his fantasies could be made reality.

Scarcely a minute into his journey along the road to town and he slowed his steed’s gallop to a trot, then halted her altogether. A veteran’s intuition from a short lifetime of constant battle had begun to nag at him. It came on softly at first, then stronger and stronger, until he had finally stopped to assess the situation. Realization had hit him like a battering ram. Were it a fire alone, there would be even-toned shouting and little else. Were it wild tribes of men or foreign invaders, there would screams of rage and panicked wailing. What John heard on the wind, he would never forget: shouts, pleading, growls, moans, and sick, twisted laughter. Momano had taken the town.

Worse than any other foe, he feared the momano. Though he cared little for his life any longer, he would prefer to keep his soul, which would surely be forfeit if he fell at their hands. And what he had seen, what they had done to his friend, how those memories hounded him constantly, all weighed heavy on his mind. Just the thought of seeing momano again started his his hands to shaking, swaying Tess’s reigns like they were caught in the midst of a soft breeze.

Just about the only enemy he had tangled with that hadn’t robbed a piece of him had been the momano… Although they had tried harder than any of the others. The difference had been that they had the unnerving tendency to capture their enemies alive, often as willing as not, through either brute force, corruption of the mind, or both. There had been a time when John had a hardy constitution, far more than most men, both mentally and physically.

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ab5d76  No.396588


Six Years Ago

John felt the barb pierce his side. It didn’t hurt, and he didn’t expect it to. It had been described as a firm pressure at the site of the wound that drove a man mad with lust. He knew now the truth in those words. It had been errantly flung along with a dozen others by single large manticore warrior, no doubt hoping to claim a few more of his fleeing men. He could perhaps resist the barb’s effects long enough to reach his retreating unit’s rally-point. Had he been a normal man, or had he been the sole focus of the barb’s owner, he would not have held out any hope of making it home that day.

But his dearest friend Michael, and immediate subordinate, would not be so lucky. Not only had he taken a barb too, but the manticore warrior had found its target in him. Like a shark picking out a single fish from a school, she pursued him with the intensity of a starving predator. His friend would make the ultimate sacrifice for God and Empire.

It’s attention solely on Michael, the tall manticore tackled the man to the ground and began tearing into his armor with its claws and tail, driving no less than half a dozen spines in the man’s chest in the process. He tried to pull his friend free but he could not be budged under the beast’s grip. There was no hope for the man. The manticore’s tail was already in place, ravishing his friend to the sound of his own screams. He would be taken back to the beast’s lair, food for the growing life that Michael himself was unwillingly siring inside the hellion’s womb at this very moment.

John’s sword heavy in his hand, he considered dispatching his friend for the preservation of his soul and honor, and to deny the beast her offspring. It was his duty, his requirement after all. He sheathed the weapon instead, knowing well enough the task’s impossibility. The manticore warrior would never permit it, for one. Not only had she effectively obstructed Michael from any angle of effective dispatch, but she would almost certainly block such an attack. For another, it would only get them both killed, whether or not he was successful. The beast would see him as a threat to her prey and react immediately. It was also no secret that men taken by momano ended their lives in blinding ecstasy, as was obviously the case with his dear friend. Better to die that way, John reasoned, than by the cold steel of a friend’s sword. Of course, the most important reason John refused to act was simple selfishness. He could not bring himself to raise a hand against his friend, no matter the consequences.

Instead, he ran to the rally-point, unnoticed, he hoped, by the ravaging monstrosities strewn about the battlefield. He was not alone among the survivors. His whole unit had either routed with him or been set-upon like his dear friend, soon to be captured and devoured. This had been their best possible outcome in the face of stumbling into a surprise mamono attack. They were unprepared for such a fight, and the mamono had been all but unstoppable since their new commander had been appointed.

9edf78  No.396596


>dead thread

>thread hit bump limit back in December

You could always start a new thread with your story. I'm guessing you are new here?

ab5d76  No.396598



I will do that. Thank you. How do you tell if it hit the bump limit?

e7beba  No.396599


Bump limit's 400 posts on this board.

7d7491  No.396640


Good stuff, anon. It’s cute and a just sad enough to accentuate the cuteness.

Also that ending made me laugh for about 5 minutes like a retard

6bc876  No.396690

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Glad you like it, part two should be coming out soon, probably tomorrow.

88c345  No.396781

https://pastebin.com/T7mYkj0p/-'Don't be afraid'

https://pastebin.com/G8xcUyW0/-'The Witch of Hithercombeshire'

by HumbleSacrifice/-Sacrifice-

If anyone has a copy of these archived somewhere, I'd really, really, really appreciate it

Not really sure of my drawfag skills, but I could offer an (eventual) request as thanks

88c345  No.396782



Don't be afraid


The witch of Hithercombeshire

My retarded ass can't do one thing right, damn

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